martin s
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Hey guys,
I'd like to edit those down to a few, but frankly I'm unable to. Not that I like them all that much - quite the opposite - I just can't tell what works and what doesn't. Please quickly skim them and maybe jot down the numbers you dislike or don't seem fit. It's supposed to be a coherent essay once edited down to 10-15 images.
If you want to tell me why images don't work for you, I'd of course appreciate it, but I understand that it's quite time consuming.
As always, please be honest.
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I'd like to edit those down to a few, but frankly I'm unable to. Not that I like them all that much - quite the opposite - I just can't tell what works and what doesn't. Please quickly skim them and maybe jot down the numbers you dislike or don't seem fit. It's supposed to be a coherent essay once edited down to 10-15 images.
If you want to tell me why images don't work for you, I'd of course appreciate it, but I understand that it's quite time consuming.
As always, please be honest.
---- Images removed. Thanks guys!
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Sparrow
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1 6 9 10 and 12 strike me as the stronger shots, at first glance that is
martin s
Well-known
Very interesting, a completely different direction than I would have taken. Thanks a lot!
martin
martin
le vrai rdu
Well-known
good subject 
You should maybe wait for a big race, it seems there is not a lot of people
You should maybe wait for a big race, it seems there is not a lot of people
12 is the one sir...
Sherwood44
Newbie
Hi Martin,
They are all good (some better than others) in a technical sense. What Struck me as an Essay there was no big crowd, no excitement generated, no immediacy, no joy no sorrow. It would have looked for a big race , the horses comming to the finish line in a group. You know, dust,Dirt,Mud flying somthing that exemplifies action. All this from an old race horse auctioneer.
Bill
They are all good (some better than others) in a technical sense. What Struck me as an Essay there was no big crowd, no excitement generated, no immediacy, no joy no sorrow. It would have looked for a big race , the horses comming to the finish line in a group. You know, dust,Dirt,Mud flying somthing that exemplifies action. All this from an old race horse auctioneer.
Bill
martin s
Well-known
Thanks guys. I looked at the images again, and I can see there's a direction missing (adding to the mediocrity). I won't wrap the essay up, but keep on shooting. Maybe figure out what to look for first.
I'll take the images down, since posting them online is somewhat of a grey area.
I do really appreciate the comments!
martin
yoyo22
Well-known
I missed the photos. What specific reason you had for taking them down?
martin s
Well-known
Some were taken when I was there hanging out, but some I took with the permission of the company running the whole thing in a fenced off area. I'll go shoot there one more day, edit them down to ten and upload them again (if I'm allowed to, which, I'm sure, I am).
I actually thought about emphasizing the loneliness conveyed by some rather inconspicuous individuals participating in some heavy betting there, rather than action shots.
This picture I have in my mind is the guy who shows no emotions whatsoever, even when the crowd goes nuts. The kind of gambler whose addicted to the game. They are there, I just didn't capture them.
martin
Sparrow
Veteran
I liked that compulsive - driven feel, had a sense of intimacy that would be lost in a crowd ... you may be better picking a few you like, arranging them into a story and then trying to take some more to fill any gaps