2010 20 pics

[bene]

Hello i posted a portfolio a year ago that was planne to be used as a portfolio on a bfa. I not doing a bfa maybe an mfa after my bsc.
The 20 pictures are from 2010 and I hope this 20 pics to show different themes and my range in terms of degree on emotion, subject matter and composition.
Advice will be great !
http://www.flickr.com/photos/bene123/sets/72157625592244299/


L1000801.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1000738.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1000605.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1000284.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


DSC03169.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


DSC_0007-4.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


DSC_0020-3.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


DSC_0003-2.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


IMG_0085-2.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1014068.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1014025.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1014015.jpg by bene123, on Flickr

 

[Ranchu]

I don't take my opinion all that seriously to critique people. I think you might want to get a bit closer, in general. The later ones are stronger, I think. I like these best. http://www.flickr.com/photos/bene123/5310870941/in/set-72157625592244299/ http://www.flickr.com/photos/bene123/5311465322/in/set-72157625592244299/ http://www.flickr.com/photos/bene123/5310877047/in/set-72157625592244299/ http://www.flickr.com/photos/bene123/5310881921/in/set-72157625592244299/ http://www.flickr.com/photos/bene123/5311484586/in/set-72157625592244299/

 

[bene]

L1013271.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1012831.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1012699.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1012677.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1012522.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1011378.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


L1003460.jpg by bene123, on Flickr


It say 35mm but its a 50mm by bene123, on Flickr

 

[bene]

I don't take my opinion all that seriously to critique people. I think you might want to get a bit closer, in general. The later ones are stronger, I think. I like these best. http://www.flickr.com/photos/bene123/5310870941/in/set-72157625592244299/ http://www.flickr.com/photos/bene123/5311465322/in/set-72157625592244299/ http://www.flickr.com/photos/bene123/5310877047/in/set-72157625592244299/ http://www.flickr.com/photos/bene123/5310881921/in/set-72157625592244299/ http://www.flickr.com/photos/bene123/5311484586/in/set-72157625592244299/

Thanks for the suggestion! Yes it was a big problem when I first started when. It was very obvious one I swapped from 50 to 35. Now I'm have better control but I do see your point.
This was my previous attempt :
http://www.rangefinderforum.com/forums/showthread.php?t=89183

 

[Pickett Wilson]

I agree. You need to get closer. Even if you are using a wide angle lens, something needs to dominate the frame. As some looking at photos, I want to clearly know what interested the photographer when he snapped the photo.