Lorenzo,
Looking good already, though I agree that it's a bit high contrast (lacks some shadow detail) -- a bit of pre-flash will help lighten up the shadows and reduce contrast. Once you get that dialed in, you'll be set to go. IIRC, JoeV on f295.org does a lot of pre-flashing paper and he gets beautiful tonality -- as do others (just can't remember names as I haven't been there, or shot pinhole, for quite some months now).