Critique #11 (5p,1i/p)

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Welcome to this critique thread. Please read the purpose statement and the guidelines/ground rules regarding participation.

Purpose
The primary purpose of this thread is to provide a forum where photographers can give and receive constructive criticism on one another's photographs. By setting up some basic guidelines we hope that this thread will provide a forum where the give and take of honest constructive criticism can help us become better photographers.

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The thread has very specific rules regarding participation. The one basic rule is that you cannot provide criticism on an image or comment in a critique thread unless you also have an image posted. To post an image to this thread you must be a participant. Participation in this thread is limited. Here are the guidelines and ground rules for participation:

• Participation in this thread is limited to 5 photographers
• Participants join the thread by posting their intention. You can simply reply with your intent to join by posting something like: "I'm joining," "I'm in," or just state your name
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• Once every photographer has commented then a free flowing discussion begins. It is at this point that every photographer can comment on their own work and reply to comments, ask questions, etc.
• The participants decide when the thread closes.


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I'm in on this one.

Drew

P.S. By the way, stupid question, are images strickly rangefinder made, or is it open? I'm fine with just rangefinder, but I was only wondering.
 
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Add Ducky again. I did one critique already so bump me if necessary. Any theme (portrait etc.)?
 
I am not in on this one, but have a question. What does the "5p, 1i/p" mean?

allan
 
Thanks nomade. But isn't that the basic rule, anyway?

I signed up for one, so we'll see how it goes.

allan
 
Ducky said:
I believe that's five. Any theme?
Why don't we keep it free for now. This is the first critique I've gotten a chance to get in on so, yeah. But I can go with the majority on this one.

Drew
 
No there's no theme, the theme is usually written in the title of a thread.

Edit: i've just got home with a newly developped roll, i'll scan the photo(s), and they'll be here later tonight or tomorrow morning...
 
Dressed in white.

Dressed in white.

Looks like I'm first again.

Canon A35F on Fujifilm 200-scanned
 

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Taken in Colorado National Monument. Canon TLb and (outdated) Fuji Sensia 100.

Drew
 

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"A glass of wine", i beleive that there were something wrong with the developpment(only a guess), most of the roll is too contrasty, i donno how, it's not the 1st time to shoot with a tmax 100:bang: , but i'd like to have some critique on thsi one, i'm likin it.
 

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gabrielma said:
I'm in...

Adding words because my message "is too short".

We still waiting on Gabrielma? Maybe we should just go ahead with the four we've got.
I'll check this evening.
 
Ducky said:
We still waiting on Gabrielma? Maybe we should just go ahead with the four we've got.
I'll check this evening.
Oh, my. I'm blushing. :eek: I forgot to subscribe to this thread. :bang:

I'll upload as soon as I get home. :eek:
 
gabrielma said:
Oh, my. I'm blushing. :eek: I forgot to subscribe to this thread. :bang:

I'll upload as soon as I get home. :eek:

Photoshop color cast and desaturation will take care of that blush.:D
 
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