Critique #16 No Theme--5 participants

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Welcome to this critique thread. Please read the purpose statement and the guidelines/ground rules regarding participation.

Purpose
The primary purpose of this thread is to provide a forum where photographers can give and receive constructive criticism on one another's photographs. By setting up some basic guidelines we hope that this thread will provide a forum where the give and take of honest constructive criticism can help us become better photographers.

Guidelines/Ground Rules
The thread has very specific rules regarding participation. The one basic rule is that you cannot provide criticism on an image or comment in a critique thread unless you also have an image posted. To post an image to this thread you must be a participant. Participation in this thread is limited. Here are the guidelines and ground rules for participation:

• Participation in this thread is limited to 5 photographers
• Participants join the thread by posting their intention. You can simply reply with your intent to join by posting something like: "I'm joining," "I'm in," or just state your name
• Joining is on a "first come, first served" basis. The first 5 to reply become the participants
• Once the thread has 5 participants, no other photographers can join or participate in the thread
• Once the thread is full of participants all photographers will upload their image(s)
Please abide by any thematic requirement (e.g., landscape, portrait, etc.)
•The number of photos for each participant is limited to one
• Photographers attach photos as thumbnails (no inline images or links)
• Photographers post their images supplying titles (if any) and other pertinent information (the amount of information should be minimal)
• Photographers can only comment on their own images and reply to comments only when everyone else in the thread has posted their comments on the image
• Every participant must comment on every photo (except their own—initially)
• Every participant must make at least two comments, one positive comment, and one constructive criticism (which is actually two positive comments)
• Once every photographer has commented then a free flowing discussion begins. It is at this point that every photographer can comment on their own work and reply to comments, ask questions, etc.
• The participants decide when the thread closes.


If you'd like to participate in a critique thread and need some ideas about how to proceed with viewing images critically, you may find this thread helpful:

How do you look at photos

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Remember: Please do not provide criticism on an image or comment in a critique thread unless you also have an image posted.

This thread is now active, please follow the guidelines if you'd like to participate! Have Fun!



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Sunrise over the Gulf [unaltered]

This is a photo that I like and that others don't seem to care for. It is perfect for such a critique thread.
 

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raid amin said:
Sunrise over the Gulf
This is a photo that I like and that others don't seemto care for. It is perfect for such a critique thread.
http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=2679193
Naughty naughty:

• Photographers attach photos as thumbnails (no inline images or links)

(I'm still deciding which of mine to use. I'm trying to use the ones I'm at least slightly unsure of)
 
gabrielma said:
Naughty naughty:

• Photographers attach photos as thumbnails (no inline images or links)

(I'm still deciding which of mine to use. I'm trying to use the ones I'm at least slightly unsure of)


I have de-naughtified my posting.
Now a photo is shown. :angel:
 
I suppose I get to be second to post a picture.

I apologize in advance for an SLR photo. Minolta XG-1 w/ MC Rokkor 28mm.

I call this one "Frontside".
 

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Arrow

Arrow

The whole roll was damaged, i just brought this back to its normal color, supposedly...Tmax, fed 3...
 

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Triple portrait

Triple portrait

yashica gsn, fuji nph as far as I recall...
 

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