Critique #59 *Street Photography* 5 Participants

Nachkebia
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Intriguing image. The net looks out of focus while the child is in focus, which suggests that the child is not on the table tennis table. My take, for what it is worth, is that the child is not on the table, but on a trampoline behind the table tennis table.

I find the grey patch on the left and all the legs under the table very distracting.


Jon
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This is a very good environmental portrait. I like the OOF area at the front, the "randomness" of the background and especially the look on the women's face.


Pherdinand
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I like the variety of statues and the way they seem to be vieing for customers' attention.

The image would be much better if the guy in the background was visible.


ampguy
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Good capture. The girl with the open book, the other book on her table and the shelves in the back make this a pleasing image.

I think this image would be much better if the round table was completely visible/isolated. I would consider cropping out the door and person on the LHS. I would also consider cropping the bottom of the image to remove the book on the square table.

Regards,
David
 
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