Critique Everything

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Semuta

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Hello.

Here are some of my first scans (Plustek 7400, very rough/ignore the borders) from my first few home-developed rolls (Tri-X in HC-110 dilution B) on my relatively new to me Leica MP with Voigtlander Ultron 28/2. I'm also somewhat new to photography in general.

Please critique everything.

These don't really have the look I want, whatever that is. These just all seem a bit cold. I'm not sure this is the right lens for me either. So lay it on me: suggested scanner settings; noticeable developing issues; disagreeable focus and composition concerns. Good things too, please. Thank you.

Without further ado...

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Hallway by The_Semuta, on Flickr[/IMG]

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Bedtime by The_Semuta, on Flickr

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Screen by The_Semuta, on Flickr[/IMG]

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Train Station by The_Semuta, on Flickr

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Del Mar by The_Semuta, on Flickr
 
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