critique

[begona]

good day rff members,
I am here for a while,shooting with m3 and trying to develop my photography skills but it is hard to get some honest, good critique on photographs so....I am going to ask here...if ou have some time to look some of my work and write what you think, what to do better, who would you did the same situation, globaly what to improve and so on....

be free to write what ever you think...from good critique I (and we) will learn and improve photography skills.

here is my web site

gbegonja.tumblr.com

also you can check my rff gallery.

thank you all and have a good light.
goran

 

[valdas]

I checked your website and I love the way you see and photograph the street and landscape. Really nice photos.

 

[Richard G]

I've seen some of your blog photos before, perhaps in the Gallery. I agree with valdas, they're very good. I would not feel I could add much. I have had some helpful criticism here in the gallery, suggestions to crop or change post processing etc. I can't imagine getting a lot of helpful criticism or giving any unless it was an afternoon in someone's presence and there was some wine and we had a mutual respect and trust. Failing that I am working through taking the next 10,000 pictures and just as importantly, looking at the next 10,000 pictures, especially here in the Gallery.

 

[begona]

yeah, it is nonsense to expect lot of advices over net but it is only way to comunicate as we are all over the world...and I am always for talkin about photos much more than about cameras...lot of people have great cameras but low photographic skills...

and thank you for comments

 

[boomguy57]

I think that your shots are nice but I would like to see them laid out a bit better. I don't like the scrolling, and I'd love to see bigger photos too.

Nice work.

 

[Damaso]

Not bad all in all. You are at a good baseline but I would say you need to push yourself to make more complex and layered images. Also I find your narrative voice is a bit lacking with probably has to do with the first two points I made. Your composition is fairly good though your Istanbul work shows a bit of a fear of getting close, perhaps in strange places? I would say take on a single project for a while and see how your images develop. Good luck!

 

[begona]

thanks damaso...that is kind of advice that I want to hear...I used to shoot with 50mm lens and i think that I need to be wider to be involved in situation.