Greune & San Antonio & Missions

venchka

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October 23 & 24, 2010. Canon digital. c&c always appreciated.

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A sample.........

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Thanks for looking.
 
Hi Wayne. As a record of your trip, they are fine, but as a "public" photos, they do not do a lot in conveying the sense of your road trip. When I take a trip, esp. a road trip, I like to give a sense of movement and progression between photos (think of a photo album that tells a story in pictures). This is just me; there are other ways of creating visual impact from these kinds of photos.

As to the individual pictures, you need:
--More people in your photos. Not just people randomly stuck in the photo, but people doing things that are interesting. I think the photo of the stone worker is the best of the entire lot.
--Photos of your family. Again, the value of these photos seems to be very personal and not public in nature, but since these photos are for yourself and your family, you need to include them--granddaughter, daughter, you, etc.
--Less photos of isolated objects, like the Texas flag or the twirly thing. They are decorative, but that's it.

I like San Jose-5, it might work as b&w w/ the contrast bumped up; San Jose-1 is also a nice scene. San Jose-6: flip upside down, it's a smile. By the way, I have family in S.A., and when I was a teenager I would ride my bike to the missions, and that was a lot of fun. I have a picture of my two boys playing in the turret at San Jose-6, and I like it very much because of the play of the light.

Keep shooting!
 
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Thank you! I agree with with everything you say. I don't "do" people well. I need more practice. I'll work on it.
 
I feel similarly, I do don't photograph people very well, with the exception of my family, who I photograph a lot (big extended family). On a recent trip to Spain w/ my wife, I tried really hard to take photos of strangers, and it was not always easy, but I got a few decent shots. Click my flickr link and tell me what you think.
 
you just never know who will be in a photo....I was wondering if you got a chance to speak with the "craftsman" in San Jose #10...his name is Miroslav Maler and lives in NYC upper west side...this is his second year down there on this project....if you go back and he is there tell him Bill and Milan from Gallup say hi.That should open up a great conversation.....really nice guy....regards,Bill
 
We chatted briefly. My wife had a longer talk while I was off shootting really important stuff. Miroslav said that the entire facade would be covered with scaffolding beginning the week after we were there. In fact, one whole side of the mission had a bunch of stuff piled up for the renovation. A huge manlift made photographing that side impossible.
Small world, hey?
 
Glad you got a chance to talk...our friend Milan came down to my shop a took a digital photo of your picture of Miro on the computer screen and is forwarding it to him as I write...hope you get a chance to visit him again...might be an opening for a photo project...Kind regards,Bill
 
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