Tim Gray
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Every shot shows focused areas and sharpness: the limit was camera shake and selective focus.
Color is the biggest problem there: a part of it came from no filtering and slight underexposure, and another part came from scanning, which also limits sharpness....
The color is less worrisome in my mind. A slow daylight film shot indoors? Yeah that's a recipe for bad color. Same with underexposure, particularly with Ektar.
However, I don't see where shooting a 35/1.2 somewhat wide open during the day should give you camera shake. Even at f/16 on a sunny day, an appropriate shutter speed would be 1/125, which is enough to get rid of camera shake (for the most part) at the image sizes shown here. It looks like he was opened up a lot more than that too.
Regardless, there's something seriously funky in my mind with the sharpness in these images. I do not see a GOOD plane of focus anywhere in any of the shots. Everything is pretty fuzzy. I'm guessing the scanner, but who knows. For $2 of film and 1 hr + $5 at the local target, he can shoot a test and take the scanner out of the equation. If that is good, then great.
What shutter speed were you using?