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Ororaro

Ororaro

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Please critique honestly this picture.

You can be nice, brutal, honest or dishonest. Just say what you think of it...

Thanks!
 
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I'll be really honest - it doesn't do anything for me, I don't understand the context of what is going on or what is of interest here.
 
ampguy said:
I'll be really honest - it doesn't do anything for me, I don't understand the context of what is going on or what is of interest here.
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Well, I'll be even more honest: I think it's pure garbage. I'm just curious to know what other people think.
 
NB23 said:
Well, I'll be even more honest: I think it's pure garbage. I'm just curious to know what other people think.
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Ok, so is this a trick question? And now that you've told us what you think at the very beginning you've really ruined it. :)

/T
 
well, will try to critique

-I don't see what you mean with this picture
-trouble with horizontality
-your subject is lost amid uniterestings stuffs : car , bin, etc ( maybe an other aperture would be better)
-Composition is quite poor
-too far from the guy
-whites are burned :/
 
Tuolumne said:
Ok, so is this a trick question? And now that you've told us what you think at the very beginning you've really ruined it. :)

/T
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Well, seriously, I don't want my reputation (whatever it is) to be tarnished by the 0.0001% chance that someone may think I like it. But who knows, maybe is there a genious around who'll like it?
 
NB23 said:
Well, seriously, I don't want my reputation (whatever it is) to be tarnished by the 0.0001% chance that someone may think I like it. But who knows, maybe is there a genious around who'll like it?
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don't care about you reputation, just make pictures that seem good to you :)
 
too centered, nothing happening of any interest, I feel like I'm missing something.

funny thing is, this looks like 99% of my shots ;)

Todd
 
Tuolumne said:
Wait a minute...now I get it...I see your name tucked away in the upper left corner! Bingo. Sheer brilliance.

/T
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Actually there is more. You can clearly read 23nb is a fag. That's sheer brilliance, I confess. It's the image that worries me. If at least it was good :bang:
 
The lampost and the car intrude. Absent those, it begins to work. Even the lampost could stay; if only the car were gone...the flower guy, the trash bin, and the lampost might make a nice triumvitate against the long red awning.

What the heck: P'hop that Detroit Iron outta there & see if you don't like it better:D
 
W Morgan said:
The lampost and the car intrude. Absent those, it begins to work. Even the lampost could stay; if only the car were gone...the flower guy, the trash bin, and the lampost might make a nice triumvitate against the long red awning.

What the heck: P'hop that Detroit Iron outta there & see if you don't like it better:D
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Oh, I get it! Erase the guy, the flowers, the lamp post and the cars... Yup, I already see some improvement!
 
I can see "NB23 is a fag" other than that and Scott's flowery cap the picture sucks. If it sucked a little less, it might have been worth analyzing, but it so obviously sucks that I'm sure it's apparent to you.
 
so ... the flower guy, did you have to pay him to stand there, or simply wait for someone carrying a large obtrusive object to stand in the right spot.

very funny.
 
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