Please critique

[Ororaro]

Please critique honestly this picture.

You can be nice, brutal, honest or dishonest. Just say what you think of it...

Thanks!

 

[ampguy]

I'll be really honest - it doesn't do anything for me, I don't understand the context of what is going on or what is of interest here.

 

[Ororaro]

I'll be really honest - it doesn't do anything for me, I don't understand the context of what is going on or what is of interest here.

Well, I'll be even more honest: I think it's pure garbage. I'm just curious to know what other people think.

 

[Tuolumne]

I don't get it either. Doesn't say anything to me one way or the other.

/T

 

[Tuolumne]

Well, I'll be even more honest: I think it's pure garbage. I'm just curious to know what other people think.

Ok, so is this a trick question? And now that you've told us what you think at the very beginning you've really ruined it. 🙂

/T

 

[le vrai rdu]

well, will try to critique

-I don't see what you mean with this picture
-trouble with horizontality
-your subject is lost amid uniterestings stuffs : car , bin, etc ( maybe an other aperture would be better)
-Composition is quite poor
-too far from the guy
-whites are burned :/

 

[Ororaro]

Ok, so is this a trick question? And now that you've told us what you think at the very beginning you've really ruined it. 🙂

/T

Well, seriously, I don't want my reputation (whatever it is) to be tarnished by the 0.0001% chance that someone may think I like it. But who knows, maybe is there a genious around who'll like it?

 

[le vrai rdu]

Well, seriously, I don't want my reputation (whatever it is) to be tarnished by the 0.0001% chance that someone may think I like it. But who knows, maybe is there a genious around who'll like it?

don't care about you reputation, just make pictures that seem good to you 🙂

 

[Tuolumne]

I know - it was taken with your Noctilux. Great shot. Amazing bokeh! 😛

/T

 

[Tuolumne]

Wait a minute...now I get it...I see your name tucked away in the upper left corner! Bingo. Sheer brilliance.

/T

 

[Todd.Hanz]

too centered, nothing happening of any interest, I feel like I'm missing something.

funny thing is, this looks like 99% of my shots 😉

Todd

 

[Ororaro]

Wait a minute...now I get it...I see your name tucked away in the upper left corner! Bingo. Sheer brilliance.

/T

Actually there is more. You can clearly read 23nb is a fag. That's sheer brilliance, I confess. It's the image that worries me. If at least it was good :bang:

 

[Tuolumne]

I see "NB23 is a xag." What is a "xag"?

/T

 

[W Morgan]

The lampost and the car intrude. Absent those, it begins to work. Even the lampost could stay; if only the car were gone...the flower guy, the trash bin, and the lampost might make a nice triumvitate against the long red awning.

What the heck: P'hop that Detroit Iron outta there & see if you don't like it better😀

 

[Ororaro]

The lampost and the car intrude. Absent those, it begins to work. Even the lampost could stay; if only the car were gone...the flower guy, the trash bin, and the lampost might make a nice triumvitate against the long red awning.

What the heck: P'hop that Detroit Iron outta there & see if you don't like it better😀

Oh, I get it! Erase the guy, the flowers, the lamp post and the cars... Yup, I already see some improvement!

 

[Tuolumne]

Actually, the whole thing reads "NB23 is a F Scott's Flowers xag". Do your subjects frequently speak to you?

/T

 

[Ororaro]

Actually, the whole thing reads "NB23 is a F Scott's Flowers xag". Do your subjects frequently speak to you?

/T

LOL! Hehehe

 

[foto_fool]

Thank you, Ned. I really needed that.

 

[Anupam]

I can see "NB23 is a fag" other than that and Scott's flowery cap the picture sucks. If it sucked a little less, it might have been worth analyzing, but it so obviously sucks that I'm sure it's apparent to you.

 

[dannynono]

so ... the flower guy, did you have to pay him to stand there, or simply wait for someone carrying a large obtrusive object to stand in the right spot.

very funny.