RF haiku poetry

Thanx to FrankS, GREAT idea to open this thread!

Ok folks, for the hardliners, let's have a bit of theory.

Haiku originate from mediaeval Japanese court poetry, deriving from a short poem consisting of 5-7-5-7-7 syllables (I keep forgetting the name of that one), shortly after having been even more reduced to 5-7-5, forcing any author to stick to the subject as close as possible.

There were two developments of the Haiku in the following centuries, (i) an intellectual sort of party game in which the participants held dialogues or discussions in the 5-7-5 form and (ii) a meditative form of catching or snapping a moment in time with its impression to or expression from the author, and being strongly connected to the lapse of time, the seasons, the emerging and vanishing of all things and beings, and the minute illusion of a halt in that process one tends to feel in a moment, for example on new years day.

What could be more reminiscent of or similar to photography?

I have often thought of this when seeing photographs by Roger Fenton, Eugene Atget, Albert Renger-Patzsch, Manuel Alvarez-Bravo, Henri Cartier-Bresson, Philip Lorca DiCorcia, Bastienne Schmidt... (you name them!).

There is an essay by the late Susan Sontag I found quoted in a book about the history of photography in which she states that photography catches live moments but that in spite - or rather because of - that the resulting photographs themselves are dead, a mere illusion of bringing the lapse of time to a brief halt, so according to Sontag no photography can be done without this relation to time, illusion - and finally death.

Now this concept is extraordinarily and astonishingly close to the feeling of Haiku.

At this point, and on a historical basis, it is very important to emphasize that the most famous Haiku poets, like Basho and Buzon, were also of strong Buddhist faith, in which the identity of impression and illusion plays an important role - so far that one is confronted with the, at first sight, shocking sentence that the self and its longings are an illusion themselves, vain and void.

What remains is to catch and convey the feel of the moment and the sympathy for all the things and beings that are subject to time.

So there is a strong and firm philosophical concept underlying FrankS's idea of starting this thread.

Whoever has become depressed having read this: Hey, snap your rangefinder and take photographs of the weekend party, your children playing in the garden, your dog madly running after a piece of wood or anything and ENJOY!!! 😀

(Darn me, and what about the photo albums that end up being sold on the flea markets some fifty years later? - It's all in the concept of Sue & the Haiku... :angel: )

Ok, finally: there is another similarity between a Haiku and a photograph.

Not anything 5-7-5 is a good Haiku.
Not everything in the viewfinder is a good Photograph.

But if it's to do with the minute moment of essence in the lapse of time, then it is!

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Here's mine (no camera around anyway)


Pushing the button -
now you're forever frozen,
poor little blackbird.


Jesko


P.S.: Anyone into Sonnets? There was one guy in the thread complaining that Haiku are too far off the western tradition. I would recommend Sonnets 😉 !
 
drmatthes,

nice summary and interesting reference to Sontag. I think it was the Met or MOMA which had an exhibition of early photographs of illusion, magic, and the occult. For all the pat disbelief which we have in those things, you can't help but smile a little awkwardly and yet fully at the ironic similarities with photography itself. And then haiku.
 
Ok, let's have a break with a Sonnet:

Oh, since I saw you, mine eye's in my mind,
imprison'd by beauty since then is my sight,
the beauty of nature is keeping me tied,
you wonderful CONTAX, and I'm going blind

on hearing the first clicking shutter in spring,
the aperture leaves unfolding and wide,
in dusks rosy fingers, the glorious light,
and ice slowly melting, the sun being king.

Let grace always follow the click of the cam,
the turn of the knob and rewind of the roll
and light always pass through my lens or my hole 😉
and never forget how still learning I am.

To all mortal things and all subjects of change:
Be witness'd and fix'd by my finder of range.

Jesko
 
I posted this in the last haiku thread (was not so popular for some reason). But here it is again:

yellow patch moving.
I got you in my finder.
shutter release... now.
 
drmatthes said:
Ok, let's have a break with a Sonnet:

Oh, since I saw you, mine eye's in my mind,
imprison'd by beauty since then is my sight,
the beauty of nature is keeping me tied,
you wonderful CONTAX, and I'm going blind

on hearing the first clicking shutter in spring,
the aperture leaves unfolding and wide,
in dusks rosy fingers, the glorious light,
and ice slowly melting, the sun being king.

Let grace always follow the click of the cam,
the turn of the knob and rewind of the roll
and light always pass through my lens or my hole 😉
and never forget how still learning I am.

To all mortal things and all subjects of change:
Be witness'd and fix'd by my finder of range.

Jesko


I like this. Kind of interesting use of the language. Has the flavor of something written by a second hand speaker. Very colorful and rich.
 
Crisp sunrise, fresh snow
Red vixen leads her young cubs
CompactFlash error

-o-

eBay killer price
This model still a rumor
Where's Ukraine, again?

-o-

New forum posting
Income, family, sunlight
Such fond memories
 
OK, having penned a quick poem in a thread elsewhere, I thought I'd start a RFF haiku thread. Then I did a search and found this and thought I'd resurrect it. Sticking to the 5-7-5 meter, my early offerings are:

Leica rangefinder
In my hands, sensuous click
Damned expensive, though

Zorki rangefinder
Leaking light, you're a lens cap
A pity, you're cheap

Contax rangefinder
Autofocus if I want
Pics as crisp as frost

Rangefinder Forum
A mine of information
A huge thief of time

Film or digital?
Not that old chestnut again
Both. Neither. Dunno.

400 ISO
Dark, light, you cover it all
Why use other speeds?

Hey processing lab
Why are your scans so noisy?
Speckles let you down
 
Youth says I am old
for not craving digital;
I, too, once was young.

Digital eye fails
to catch the sun's true color
rising in my heart.

Leica dropped: bounce, bounce.
Digital dropped: write a check.
Nothing more to say.

chris
canonetc
 
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