The Pavilion

[Kenj8246]

A driveway between buildings on the TAMU campus shot late yesterday. Zeiss Ikonta 521/16, Arista EDU 400 developed in HC-110E.

Too dark? Too light? Too much grain? Not enough grain? I'm not crazy about it, personally, but would like opinions.


The Pavilion by kenj8246, on Flickr

Kenny

 

[farlymac]

The grain thing is a matter of personal preference. The lighting is good, without too many shadows blocking details. It's a photo that leads you to a point, which in this case, is the end of the alley.

PF

 

[Ariefb]

composition wise: i'd pay more attention to the vertical straightness of the buildings in the background (looks slightly slanted in this image)