Brooding Storm cloud

[Nh3]

Hi,

I would like to know your honest opinion about these pictures, look/mood/feel it could be anything - don't hold back even on the minute details...

Thank you.

Edit: And here is a slightly lighter version.

 

[Dektol Dan]

Definition of Won Ton

Definition of Won Ton

From the Chinese:
'Swallowing Clouds'

 

[Mr_Flibble]

Pleasing to the eye composition and subject wise, but a little dark in my humble opinion.

I like the way the light is reflected off the cloud and then from the water.

 

[Nh3]

I added a slightly lighter version.

 

[Mattikk]

I think the composition is stuck. The cloud should have more space, eighter on the left or on the right.

 

[navilluspm]

I think something between the light and darker versions would be better. The land mass makes the horizon look a little off. Try burning the land mass a little more.

Composition wise: it is ok. A neat cloud, but I must be honest that it does not draw me into the picture. Maybe cropping a little more all around might help emphasis the majesty of the cloud even more.

Just my two cents.

 

[Thardy]

Dark and foreboding, works for me.

 

[Nh3]

Thanks people, I got what I was looking for. Its incredibly useful to post pictures for critique.

Thanks once again.

 

[varjag]

A sailboat is missing. I know it is not something you control, but in this light it would've looked truly remarkable.

 

[Nh3]

A sailboat is missing. I know it is not something you control, but in this light it would've looked truly remarkable.

Well, I guess there was no sailboat owner brave enough to be around when that thing was approaching. 😉