Brutally honest critique thread

I was scrolling the page and saw this photo and immediately liked it. Didn't realize it was Eggleston till I read the paragraph above.

Totally disagree that it's only noteworthy only because it's an Eggleston. It has a very quiet but definite power conveying a particular kind of emptyness.

I can't articulate why this works so well, but I also can't escape the fact that it does.


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This is a fantastic thread. Here's a picture I took about a year ago walking in Manhattan. For some reason (that I hope someone can help me understand) it is by far the picture with the most likes in my Flickr Photostream. I am open to critiques and comments 🙂


A Manhattan couple by Mahler_seele, on Flickr

... there are lots of things to analyse on that one I think, it'll be interesting to hear peoples views

P.S. personally I think it's a very impressive photograph
 

11500004 by lukas.boutholeau, on Flickr

Right. I consider this one of my best shots, please be very brutal. I'd like to offer my critique to others but I don't I am experienced enough to offer anything substantial to some of the people here, let alone you giants that produce wonderful work here.
 
I am one of the last people to discourage ridicule of Mr Eggleston, and I'm disappointed you should think otherwise ... photography as an art-form is, and must be the art of the moment, immediate, incisive and piquant, Eggleston's dreary documentation of north America, the old days in colour is just nostalgia ... I would take a print of Keith's dancers in preference to any of Will's any day.

If the subject is stationary one doesn't need the immediacy of photography, there are lots of other media that do slow and considered artwork
When I wrote "oft derided" I wasn't even thinking of you, let alone meaning you! I know you get Eggleston!

I think I conflated apologising for coming over as patronising (answering you) with trying to explain my point less patronisingly (aimed at folk in general, not you). So, neither my explanation nor Eggleston were directed at you per se.

Anyway, apologies for seeming to imply you would diss Eggleston!

I was scrolling the page and saw this photo and immediately liked it. Didn't realize it was Eggleston till I read the paragraph above.

Totally disagree that it's only noteworthy only because it's an Eggleston. It has a very quiet but definite power conveying a particular kind of emptyness.

I can't articulate why this works so well, but I also can't escape the fact that it does.
Exactly - someone else who gets Eggleston! This kind of eye is innate and can't be taught. You're born able to see and capture scenes like this. Or you're not.

Photographs have been likened to footprints - "imprinted by Nature's hand" to quote Fox-Talbot - and this quality, this sense of connectedness with something real beyond the picture frame, that what we are looking is deeply significant to us, is what Eggleston does but many lesser photographers can't. This ability transcends technical skill and compositional skill.

Someone with this skill whom more RFF members might find to their taste is Francesca Woodman.

Returning to this thread, one thing that annoys me intensely about critiques is that the great majority ignore meaning, narrative, cultural significance and other similar qualities and instead drone on and on about composition and technical flaws. Some of this droning even suggests changes (e.g. crops) that make a photograph worse by turning it into an exercise in graphic design that destroys any vestige of narrative or other intangible quality.

When critiquing a photograph, we first need to consider what it's for, why it's been taken, what we read into it, how it affects our understanding of what's depicted, whether it impacts the subject, and the like, and how it does all these things - ignoring pictorial qualities such as composition and technique. Only when we've considered why the photograph exists and what effect this existence has on us and others should we start to look at its visual qualities - and then only in light of whether they support its message or not.

Going back to that Eggleston photograph, there are some technical "flaws" but they add to the impact of the photograph. Straightening the horizon, for example, would take away the spontaneity of this image, the feeling that we - like the photographer - have just encountered this scene.
 

11500004 by lukas.boutholeau, on Flickr

Right. I consider this one of my best shots, please be very brutal. I'd like to offer my critique to others but I don't I am experienced enough to offer anything substantial to some of the people here, let alone you giants that produce wonderful work here.

Hi Zuiko,
Thanks for posting an image here. Tell me more about why you think this is your best photograph.
 
All you need to know is that Farah died last December at the age of 14. This photo was taken about a year earlier.
OK, now finish me off.


That is stunning. Usually I don't think I'm a very good critic because I usually focus on if the picture is saying something, if it conveys something human, something that makes me want to look again... not on compositional rules or anything like that. That being said, I think that your pictures satisfies both of these sides of photographic critique:

1. On the one hand it says a lot. That bit about your dog frames the entire reading of the picture. In general I'm not a believer of the dogma that says that an image should speak for itself. Bourdieu and Foucault (as well as a postructalist like Barthes) tell us that there's nothing objective about a picture: it really depends on who looks at it, who has the power to decide what a picture says, the own psychological experiences of the viewer, etc. In other words: once you, as an author, make a statement about the picture you frame it and invite a specific reading. This picture wouldn't be as powerful if it weren't for that framing. For instance, within that reading of the dog, the blurred river (or sea) acquires a different meaning (heaven? ethereality? the fact that everything passes with time, that time cannot be held in place?).

2. On the other hand, composition wise, I love it. The picture emphasizes symmetry in everything, except for the dog. Thus that break in symmetry draws focus. Once again, this is connected to your narrative framing. Technically speaking and composition-wise I don't think I have much more to say. As I said, I'm a bad critic of these things 🙂

Hope this helps!
 
And here is one by me:

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This is one of those images that stands alone nicely (as opposed to others in this thread... more in a separate post). I like this image for its simple use of color as subject. Nothing in the image distracts my eye from the simple yellow line painted onto the lovely blue. Had the umbrellas been on a line separate from the horizon, I think the image would be a bit too confusing (not sure about that... have to see it done that way). And the people are small enough that they don't cause the viewer to ask questions about "where is this, what are they doing". Just beautiful color. Excellent.
 
This is a fantastic thread. Here's a picture I took about a year ago walking in Manhattan. For some reason (that I hope someone can help me understand) it is by far the picture with the most likes in my Flickr Photostream. I am open to critiques and comments 🙂

A Manhattan couple by Mahler_seele, on Flickr

It's the gaze, facial expressions and body language of the couple that carry this picture, even with distracting non supporting image elements like the people and signage behind them. Would like to see their hands - that's an awkward lower frame placement, IMO.
 
And here is one by me:

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This is a ho-hum picture to me. Sure, there is that nice blue/yellow colour contrast and nice clouds, but it looks like a vacation picture someone would take to remember a place they've visited. Horizon and tree are placed nicely in the desired rule of thirds. I do like it better than the eggelson picture in this thread though. 🙂
 

Great metering here! I'd like to see a version with not so much black, and another with a lot more black. I guess that says I feel like this composition is sitting in the middle of two possible stronger ways to compose it.

My thought about photographs of other people's art... the composition of the photograph has to add something new. Otherwise its just a record of someone else's work. I think your photograph goes beyond that with the tonal range you've chosen... I like that a lot. 🙂
 
Still wanting to keep us on Pictures, more than Criticism of Criticism. Here are two that I shot last weekend. I took them about an hour apart while trying out an elderly LTM lens.

Because these don't look like the pictures I usually make, I wonder what (if anything) folks might have to say about them.


A sign that says CAFE by thompsonkirk, on Flickr


ClaudeAlley by thompsonkirk, on Flickr
PS, I'll follow Raid's good advice!

Kirk,
I like the second image a lot. I see it as a wonderfully done study of texture found amongst the 'everyday'. I think its an image that points the way to a series. So... more of that please. 🙂
 
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