raid
Dad Photographer
When do we start critiquing? It is time to go ....
Raid
Raid
Pherdinand
the snow must go on
just do it, raid...
i'm following you soon
i'm following you soon
Pherdinand
the snow must go on
oops sorry let's wait for the last shot
Gabriel M.A.
My Red Dot Glows For You
I'm very sorry guys, this evening I cannot get my "repository" to come up.nomade said:as usual
So I guess I'll have to get yet another I've already posted in the past; I do want to know what y'all think about this one...
(Leica M6 + tabbed 50mm Summicron / Agfa Vista 100 - toned)
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Gabriel M.A.
My Red Dot Glows For You
And...emm...looks like one of the participants is gone (lff). Shall we call Lutz?
raid
Dad Photographer
lff said:
lff ( a name would help here):
I get the feeling of seeing motion in your image. The two people on the left are distracting though. Nice facial expressions.
Raid
raid
Dad Photographer
nomade said:
nomade ( a name would help):
Interesting power lines. Maybe if tighter framed/cropped, it will be stronger graphically.
Raid
raid
Dad Photographer
Pherdinand said:
Pherdinand: This is a busy photo, and I can't see any way to reduce the business of it. The man sitting in the front is the main character, and the rest frames him. It would have been maybe stronger if the man could have been isolated with a wider aperture.
Raid
raid
Dad Photographer
gabrielma said:
Gabriel,
The man's face is hidden. I would crop the excess on the right and crop vertically until you reach the man.
Raid
raid
Dad Photographer
OK. Now it is your turn.
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Raid
nomade
Hobbyist
Raid, my photo is titled arrow , it's int he title of the post...
, it's int he title of the post...nomade
Hobbyist
Raid- Sunrise over the Gulf
Raid- Sunrise over the Gulf
'it seems that your photo is framed from top and bottom with black, right?? The sun disk is in the midest of a navy blue tone, and there's a reflection, i wonder with that equal tonality in the ackground what caused the reflection?? I'd like to know more about how you did it..
None the less, who wouldn't love seeing a sun disk in these colors, the reflection adds a mood, it's a great postcard for the gulf area too...
Raid- Sunrise over the Gulf
'it seems that your photo is framed from top and bottom with black, right?? The sun disk is in the midest of a navy blue tone, and there's a reflection, i wonder with that equal tonality in the ackground what caused the reflection?? I'd like to know more about how you did it..
None the less, who wouldn't love seeing a sun disk in these colors, the reflection adds a mood, it's a great postcard for the gulf area too...
nomade
Hobbyist
lff- front side
lff- front side
Sporty shot, I like this motion shot, the blurry leg and back ground, the softness on the skater's body, the concentration on his face, his hands position...
lff- front side
Sporty shot, I like this motion shot, the blurry leg and back ground, the softness on the skater's body, the concentration on his face, his hands position...
nomade
Hobbyist
Pherdinand-untitled
Pherdinand-untitled
There's a lot in this photo, a lot, and that's a market, it'd normal to be buzy, laods of ddiferent stuff are for sale, antiquities, underwear, clothes and stuff, quite a variety, and that man, sitting under the sun, is either a main subject, or a complementary subject, if he's the main, maybe you should have had a shallower dof...
Pherdinand-untitled
There's a lot in this photo, a lot, and that's a market, it'd normal to be buzy, laods of ddiferent stuff are for sale, antiquities, underwear, clothes and stuff, quite a variety, and that man, sitting under the sun, is either a main subject, or a complementary subject, if he's the main, maybe you should have had a shallower dof...
nomade
Hobbyist
Gabriel ma
Gabriel ma
Well, Gabriel, i want you to look at critique no 11, i guess (that's OT)
Interesting, the effect of muted music, the hand which is the only thing in focus, amazing details, the hand that got all the talent, it's lovely even when it's myted, the pattern in the background helps the mood...
Gabriel ma
Well, Gabriel, i want you to look at critique no 11, i guess
(that's OT)Interesting, the effect of muted music, the hand which is the only thing in focus, amazing details, the hand that got all the talent, it's lovely even when it's myted, the pattern in the background helps the mood...
raid
Dad Photographer
nomade said:Raid, my photo is titled arrow
I meant "your name" nomade :angel:
Gabriel M.A.
My Red Dot Glows For You
It is challenging in the sense that his is a sun disk, and not much else other than part of it is reflected, as if melted (which is virtually always a pleasing effect). You can clearly see the Sun is on the horizon, but it could either be a sunset or a sunrise. It has nice "sun" colors...but how do we know it's "over the Gulf"? Where's the water? A hint of it, but by reference.raid amin said:
Don't quite know what to think of it.
Gabriel M.A.
My Red Dot Glows For You
Oh, wait...I just realized we have that one deleted account here.
We need a fifth entry
Unless you really want to go on as is...
We need a fifth entry
Unless you really want to go on as is...
nomade
Hobbyist
Oh my name is Racha
Oh Gabriel i didn't realize that we've a deleted account here...
Oh Gabriel i didn't realize that we've a deleted account here...
raid
Dad Photographer
Racha, Pherdinand and Gabriel:
Let's move on. Ray mentioned that the exact number of five participants could be changed. In another critique qgroup we have six participants.
Raid
Let's move on. Ray mentioned that the exact number of five participants could be changed. In another critique qgroup we have six participants.
Raid