andreios
Well-known
The constellation of people in third picture is better for my eye, but that pillar or what it is makes it too "crowded", therefore I voted for No1.
nikon_sam
Shooter of Film...
My first image, as others have posted, show a feeling of surprise from people passing by and taking a look... What the viewer can imagine depends on the viewer's imagination only... To me, it's a trash bin that was burnt, and to me also, trash bins are burnt in precise occasions, generally vandalism and other kinds of protest...
Cheers,
Juan
This is so true...not knowing how you show your anger makes it harder for me to interpret this photo...
Now, here in the states we set cars and businesses on fire...and not in protest only...we do this when our local sports team wins a championship...this is not a joke, it really happens...:bang:
porktaco
Well-known
version 1
we see the wreckage through their eyes and share a little of their feeling
we see the wreckage through their eyes and share a little of their feeling
Not to mention, #1 is the most interesting to me as a composition. It just works.
Juan Valdenebro
Truth is beauty
This is so true...not knowing how you show your anger makes it harder for me to interpret this photo...
Now, here in the states we set cars and businesses on fire...and not in protest only...we do this when our local sports team wins a championship...this is not a joke, it really happens...:bang:
By the way I like that Learning to fly quote... That record and the last one are so amazing... The band is wonderful without RW too...
I agree with you there's something with version1 that is not in the others, and maybe even without being able to describe things, it leaves an open door to imagination, and the whole image is clean, and the instant is clear...
I wasn't really expecting some people to prefer version2 or version3 as I sometimes do, but they got me now as confused as when I saw them all for the first time... I thought everybody was going to prefer version1...
Thanks a lot!
Cheers,
Juan
Juan Valdenebro
Truth is beauty
IMHO i find version 1 better in a aesthetically way. Composition is clean and it's well balanced.
Talking about the message, i think version 3 can be quite confusing. Maybe someone could think that cheaper booze leads young people to burn bins
Cheers!
Hi,
Very good point... Indeed when I saw the ad and made the last versions, I was thinking drinking is a big part on disturbs and fire... I guess your point is valid, and as a previous member said, version1 works better because it shows anyone's tranquility can be surprised anytime by unexpected situations... Maybe I should just forget the crisis narrative thing, and just respect the best composition and the best instant...
Cheers,
Juan
Juan Valdenebro
Truth is beauty
3 works for me. 1 is confusing, 2 is clinical.
Whichever you chose, it works for a third of your audience. This poll shows the varied variety and preference of this community.
After not looking at the images for some hours, I just took a look at them and found version3 the best one. I agree with you totally: version1 is confusing. No way to understand... Version3 may not be a beauty, but talks about us as a society in a more complete way: there's a story there... I'll look at them once again in a few days and decide, but I think version3 will finally be the printed one... It was also the only one that satisfied me while shooting... I stopped shooting the scene after that shot...
Thanks all for the kind help!
Cheers,
Juan
Keith
The best camera is one that still works!
After not looking at the images for some hours, I just took a look at them and found version3 the best one. I agree with you totally: version1 is confusing. No way to understand... Version3 may not be a beauty, but talks about us as a society in a more complete way: there's a story there... I'll look at them once again in a few days and decide, but I think version3 will finally be the printed one... It was also the only one that satisfied me while shooting... I stopped shooting the scene after that shot...
Thanks all for the kind help!
Cheers,
Juan
I've only just checked out this thread and I agree with your choice Juan.
Number 3 conveys something to me that the other two don't for some reason ... and I don't read Spanish!
nikon_sam
Shooter of Film...
It was also the only one that satisfied me while shooting... I stopped shooting the scene after that shot...
Thanks all for the kind help!
Cheers,
Juan
That's usually a good indicator...
Juan Valdenebro
Truth is beauty
I've only just checked out this thread and I agree with your choice Juan.
Number 3 conveys something to me that the other two don't for some reason ... and I don't read Spanish!![]()
Thanks Keith! I appreciate your opinion: I was wondering where you were, as I remember sometimes you like to shoot several versions too, and pick one afterwards... You might not speak Spanish, but maybe you've known about drinking and setting things on fire...
Cheers,
Juan
Juan Valdenebro
Truth is beauty
By the way, it's the first time I use 3200 under harsh sunlight at f/2... It was fun, and required 1/2000, yellow (B+W) and ND8 (Nikon) filters... One of those things poor little SLRs just can't do...
Cheers,
Juan
Cheers,
Juan
Keith
The best camera is one that still works!
Thanks Keith! I appreciate your opinion: I was wondering where you were, as I remember sometimes you like to shoot several versions too, and pick one afterwards... You might not speak Spanish, but maybe you've known about drinking and setting things on fire...:angel:
Cheers,
Juan
Civil disobedience used to be quite popular over here but successive conservative governments have managed to bore the habit out of us!
Aussies are so complacent ... far easier to go "Baaa" like sheep and fall into line!
Alpacaman
keen bean
Juan, I like the first one the most, mainly because we can see part of a face. 3 has all the backs turned, and leaves me wondering what their reaction to the vandalism was.
Darshan
Well-known
Version 1 for me.
elshaneo
Panographer
I find the version 1 to have the best composition, but version 3 is the best in narrating what is happening there and also there's somehow an amusing contradiction between the trash container and the ad. In the end, I voted version 3...
robklurfield
eclipse
As journalism and social commentary, #1 or #3, but it depends on what your point of view is of the story. Essentially, you have to ask whether your message is that public doesn't really care, in which case #1 works best. If your take on the story is that people are engaged, then #3 works better.
As photographs and not news, I like them all.
I'm neither a photojournalist, nor editor, nor a critic. However, I think that the photograph that works best aesthetically is not always the one that works best narratively or journalistically.
Ultimately, you have to ask yourself which one of these frames best tells your version of the events. It may not be the image you think is prettiest or even most accurate.
I think you need people in the frame. Which people is something you'll have to decide.
As photographs and not news, I like them all.
I'm neither a photojournalist, nor editor, nor a critic. However, I think that the photograph that works best aesthetically is not always the one that works best narratively or journalistically.
Ultimately, you have to ask yourself which one of these frames best tells your version of the events. It may not be the image you think is prettiest or even most accurate.
I think you need people in the frame. Which people is something you'll have to decide.
robklurfield
eclipse
FYI, I voted for #3 from the story perspective. But I prefer #1 outside of the context of the story.
Juan Valdenebro
Truth is beauty
FYI, I voted for #3 from the story perspective. But I prefer #1 outside of the context of the story.
Thanks, Rob... That's how I see it too...
Cheers,
Juan
John Lawrence
Well-known
Another vote for version 1.
John
John
OurManInTangier
An Undesirable
... I think that the photograph that works best aesthetically is not always the one that works best narratively or journalistically
As someone who regularly has what they consider their best shots of a situation 'binned' by a picture editor in favour of an image that they believe tells a fuller/better story, this quote sums up my feelings on the images you've posted. For me image 1 is my preferred image as the elements are linked and it appears to flow more. However in all honesty I wonder if there's a better image within the scene that has not been realised. Of course a 90mm as your only lens at the time won't have helped to allow you to visually explore the full scene.
Editors (and readers) may prefer flames and protesters but it is perfectly possible to sum up a scene or situation in a similar manner to that which you have tried here, it just seems in my experience to take alot more experimentation than the more obvious 'news' shots.
By the way, the picture editors are nearly always right - at least in regard to the choices they make from my submitted images.
We've never really 'talked' on RFF before but I've read many of you're clearly considered and thoughtful posts and enjoy them, it seems clear to me that you have the ability to see a different way of showing such events as these and that it is worth you pursuing this approach further.
Cheers
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