So what makes this work for me is she is young and from the side she is hold the jacket
you don't know if she is yet a woman. The guys looking and the reflection clearly shows that she is. Then you see the advertising poster that in the window that is what advertisers show as the perfect woman. So it I think it works on a visual level with all the repeating shapes (the stripes which are everywhere) and it starts to say a little bit about who we are as a society. Now whether it has any real merit I will leave to the others.
So let's hear your views. Like, hate whatever. HAVE AT IT...
OK who am i to give critique to anyuone else's photos but hey, here it comes anyway, since you've asked us all
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but take it with a mountain of salt, of course.
First of all: You should not have "talked a bit about it". Even a title is sometimes too much for a picture (if it's a single picture and not documentary, should not need any introduction or background info).
Second: the words i made bold up in the quoted text. Seriously??
-you seriously couldnt tell, only from her face?
-you seriously think this is important at all in the picture?
I do like the girl and her reflection walking out of the image and the guys staring and you staring (=it gives me the feeling a bit that i am staring at her, too), it's a good composition with a good content. But it's too broadly framed, the stripes would balance it out if there was no big patch of nothing on the right and big darkness on the top. The ad-woman face doesn't add anything for me. Your explanation on the beauty ideal etc is therefore imo forced (again, explaining it doesnt make it appear), it is not in the image (the main subject is not in strong contrast with the ad face - she looks okay nothing wrong with her face or physical appearance thus there is no contrast).
So the girl w reflection, the guys looking, with the added level of the repeating stripes is okay, the rest detracts/makes it weaker for me.
Multiple "subjects" or messages in it, would be better with a single one in focus.
I find that images like this (repeating patterns, guys staring at a girl on the street...) are so often done in street photography, that in order to make it stand out, the subject itself (or the message if any) does not suffice, you
need a very strong clean composition for it.
The old shot of the girl walking down the street in Italy and the many men staring at ehr worked because 1. it is old
🙂 2. there's a LOT of men with all different and well-visible faces / facial expressions which make the image a whole story, to look and recognize all the feelings/thoughts of those guys, and 3. compositionally it is ver well done, in balance and all around one central idea.
But i'm certainly not qualified to critique that shot
😀 i just mentioned it as comparison and since it was already brought up here, anyway...
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