Critique Photo

OK, my turn I guess. Here are a couple from the Sierra foothills in California. See what you think. Both: Canon P, Canon 50/1.5, Portra 400NC.

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first one :: imho the subject is to much centered and the light is quite flat, anyway, you can have a better picture with a better scan (to have more details in the sky, play with the scanner histogram)

second one: beautiful still life :)
 
Thanks! I was wondering whether there was enough "there" in these shots to make them interesting. I will play around w/ the first one in PS and see what I can do to make it stand out more. These shots are straight scans w/out any post-processing.
 
Steve, I think you caught a good film. It does not let the red parts (here the peppers hanging on the wall) stand out that much. I like it that way. :)

I hope to get my first color roll with the Fed-2 finished soon. It is pouring from the sky since thursday now with nearly zero break.:(:bang:
 
couldn't make photos for I had some scholar test ( first semester is over) , Hope I willl have some more to post quickly :)

I am trying Trix @ 3200 to soup it with 1+100 rodinal for 2h30
 
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