Looks good Chrism. Yes the framing does take a while to get right but like you say practice is the key, after a couple of years of using TLRs I now find it secound nature as to how to move the camera to get the frame I want
Some view finders are better than others the old Primoflex I have is the best I don't need the magnifier or my glasses for that one , My Rolleicords have the worst and take more time to focus when there is low light levels.