lynnb
Veteran
thanks Frank and nightfly, this is helpful
I'm certainly no expert at critiques but I like this. Perfectly composed to my eye. I'm going to enjoy this thread because it will help me to see what you all see.I would appreciate some direct feedback on this street photo taken at Sydney's Central Station. What got my attention was the contrast between the old ladies who were being sociable face to face, and the young woman alone and isolated on the other side of the bench making contact on her mobile phone.
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As I've been shooting my mouth off, I'd like to offer one up as well:
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Other than the angled light and lens flare, I see absolutely nothing of interest here. Just a random snap. Feet are cut off too. This would not be a keeper for me.
A four photo collection - Barriers
Would appreciate hearing your thoughts on these as a group, of if you prefer to repsond to any individual.
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Thanks Frank. I'm inclined to agree.
I was taken in by the color, the flare and the look on the woman's face but I can see that it's not enough to carry the photo. I feel like it's too centered and there isn't enough going on in the rest of the frame.
I would appreciate some direct feedback on this street photo taken at Sydney's Central Station. What got my attention was the contrast between the old ladies who were being sociable face to face, and the young woman alone and isolated on the other side of the bench making contact on her mobile phone.
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Hi Jamie. I'm hoping there will be a difference. Who can grow if all they ever hear is that their work is nice/good. People should only offer an image if they want to hear what's wrong/ weak, and due to the introduction, NO HURT FEELINGS. Can't stress this enough!
As I've been shooting my mouth off, I'd like to offer one up as well:
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